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Sunday, December 20, 2009

All in that moment, brief.

I was near you again,
what if, for a moment so brief.
My face had a fresh smile,
And heart beat not echo grief.

I wanted to hold your face
and see if your eyes
are still shy to meet mine.

I wanted to hear you say,
that you too remember me
and your heart also aches for me,sometimes.

I wanted to make you mine, again.
Be with you, Smoothen your hair,
Hear what you have to say,
All in that moment, brief.

15 comments:

Naveen goyal said...

Deep & beautifully expressed..

Anonymous said...

Its the brief moments that string together that make life time....

Vipul Goyal said...

@Naveen- Thanks a lot...Nice to see you on my blog

Vipul Goyal said...

@Anonymous- Beautifully said.

ankit said...

Pulvi: Hw du do it again and again...

Smoothen your hair....beautiful phrase.....

Inspirational....

ankit said...

You last 3 poems have been within a span of "1" month and "4" Days each....

& your latest is a Sonnet...

Are you weaving a puzzle ???

Vipul Goyal said...

@ Ankit- Glad that you read my work again and again :)
1 month and 4 days is a strange coincidence I must say, and great observation u have...No puzzles from me. :)

Piyush said...

Lovely !!

Kshitiz Verma. said...

Good one!!

ashoke bhattacherjee said...

to the power^

Ashu Mittal said...

You rock! Keep writing more!

Divya said...

Good work!!.. where does the inspiration come from ;)

Orangesplaash said...

Simple words, yet a profound meaning..I liked the use of some of the words like fresh smile, brief moment etc..Nice one!!

Vipul Goyal said...

@Ashu- Thanks my Celeb Sister

@Divya- Thanks. and so far as the inspiration is concerned I hve my muse :)

@Arwa- Thanks girl. Howz life

Vipul Goyal said...

@AShoke- Dada man, I have to find plus plus soon...